|
Home::Copywriting
9 Tips for Better Copywriting
Author : Alex A. Kecskes
We all learned how to write in school, but in advertising, there are some simple techniques that experienced writers use to convey messages with greater impact and brevity. Without being too tutorial, youll find these 9 tips quite handy when writing your next sales letter, brochure or web page.
Avoid the wimpy verbsis and be.
These do-little verbs only occupy space and state that something exists. So dont write There is one simple omission that can transform a sentence from boring to brilliant. Do write One simple omission can transform a sentence from boring to brilliant. Similarly, avoid We will be running the new program from our Dallas office. Instead, opt for We will run the new program from our Dallas office.
Place the longest item at the end of a series.
Start with the simple and work toward the complex. Its less confusing and makes a more memorable ending to the sentence. If you have a series like He was always later that Joan, loud and boring. Opt for He was loud, boring and always later that Joan.
Specifics are more convincing.
Unless you must for legal reasons, dont use words like many, several, approximately, nearly and other such mushy weasel modifiers. Specifics tell your audience that you know what your product can do based on tests, research, results, etc.
Modify thy neighbor.
Neighboring clause, that is. Make sure your modifiers apply directly to the pertinent clause in question. Do this and youll avoid such gaffes as I collided with a stationary truck coming the other way. (The truck wasnt coming the other way, it was stationary.) Better to tell the judge I was coming the other way and collided with a stationary truck. (Youll still pay the penalty for running into a truck, but at least youll come across as sober.)
Use single verbs to avoid doublespeak.
Single verbs can often do the work of two similar verbs. Instead of The computer was operating and running smoothly, go for The computer was running smoothly. Or, instead of He was empty and ran out of gas, go for the more direct He ran out of gas.
Vary sentence length.
A string of sentences all the same length can be boring. Start with a short sentence or at least a medium-length one, then go long, short, medium or any combination thereof. Imagine a person talking in sentences that are all the same length. Robotic.
Are your sentences like the Energizer Bunny?
They go on and on. Just because youre conveying legal or complex technical information, doesnt mean you have to use serpentine sentences that never seem to end. Instead of saying Laser beams, which have many properties that distinguish them from ordinary light, result from the emission of energy from atoms in the form of electromagnetic waves. Break up and re-phrase to Laser beams have many properties that distinguish them from ordinary light. They are produced when atoms emit energy in the form of electromagnetic waves.
Go short and sweet.
Why use a 4- to 5-word phrase when a 1- to 2-word version will do nicelywith no loss in meaning? Statements like in view of the fact that can be easily reduced to since or because. Word economy is particularly important, especially when youre paying for premium ad space in a major publication.
Dont overstate the obvious.
Redundancy is good for space travel, but not for clear writing. Phrases like "anticipate in advance," "totally finished," or "vital essentials" will drive your readers crazy and communicate very little. The same goes for stringing two or more synonyms together like "thoughts and ideas" or "actions and behavior. It makes readers wonder if you really meant to say two different things or just wanted to reinforce one word with a needless synonym.
So the next time youre struggling with that sales letter, mailer or web page, follow these simple rules. Theyll help you communicate your message more clearly and with greater selling power. Remember, there are 26 letters in the English alphabet. Use them wisely.
Article Source: http://www.articledashboard.com
Alex Kecskes is a former ad agency Copy Chief who has created effective copy and concepts for a wide range of ad agencies, Fortune 500 companies and startups. As owner of ak creativeworks, Alex provides strategic copy for brochures, mailers, multimedia, articles, newsletters, PR and web content. He has published articles in a variety of publications about health, business and technology--this includes copy for over 130 different products and services. His creative work has been acknowledged nationally in Andy, Belding and One Show competitions. For more information and samples, please visit: www.akcreativeworks.com
Spam emails More free articles Related articles
|
More related feeds |
9 Tips for Better Copywriting
Without being too tutorial, you’ll find these 9 tips quite handy when writing your next sales letter, brochure or web page. Avoid the wimpy verbsis and be. These “do-little” verbs only occupy space and state that something exists. ...Fifteen Tips for Better Sales Letters
Fifteen Tips For Better Sales Letters. By Ernest Nicastro. One of the most important factors in the success of your direct mail package is your sales letter. In many cases, particularly with small businesses, the sales letter may be the ... [Copyblogger] Battle Productivity Brain Drain With an Idea Budget
About the Author: Want more bookkeeping tips for your online business? Well, James can’t help you – he’sa writer, not an accountant. But if you like this post and want more great tips to have a better online business, visit James’ blog, ... Nine Signs of an Effective Blog Post
With that in mind, I’ve adapted the following tips from Bly’s “How to Write a Good Advertisement” (in Chapter 6 for those playing along at home). Here, then, are nine criteria a blog post must satisfy if it is to be a successful post: ... Copywriting Tips to Make Any Website Sell Better
9. Compare the product or service against the competitors to show and prove it’s superiority. 10. Copywriting is king and queen for the website to sell the maximum number of people. The right copywriting can bring up to double, ... 12 Essential Tips For Success in Social Media
The keys to optimizing your blog for search engine optimization are focus, discipline and creative copywriting. You need to focus on a narrow set of relevant topics, with relevant keywords and phrases; you need to maintain the ... The SEO makeover: simple tools for better traffic
Having SEO copywriters create additional keyword-rich optimized content to further improve the consistency among the page title, meta-description, meta-keywords and Header tags (H1, H2). Configuring redirect from the following: ... 13 Steps to a Slippery Slope Online Sales Letter
Offer special bonuses (preferably created by you) that are so good you could sell them alone if you wanted to. It could be a list of resources, a collection of articles, extra tips on a certain subject, or a free consu1tation. 9. ... Review Of Eben Pagan’s GuruMastermind Workshop 1
Granted the copywriter gave even better tips during the non Platinum day, but honestly, I felt I wasted my time hearing the same basic presentations twice. It was really annoying and VERY DISAPPOINTING. ... The Moody Blues
New Sales Letter By Pro Copywriter And New Bonuses. Constantly Improving Copy And Conversions. Easy Sale For You! Click To Watch The Videos. You Make $31.85 On The Front End! :: Plus $11.04 Recurring Monthly! Instant Seller! ...
|
|
|
